Friend

Friend
i know when you take your hands on my hands
when you take your eyes on my eyes

i can know you take many loans
but cannot pay back

your child has gone to the spoilt

i know your girl don't return home at the night
your wife do not want to speak you lovely

you cannot sleep at the night
i know
please take your hands on my hands
take your eyes on my eyes
and cry

only crying can make you easy
you will be more easy to speak with me

Reviews

[Stefon Napier]

Excellent poem, I will admit I found the language a bit awkward but that did not hinder me from understanding the poem itself. I would like to know what you meant by the last two lines. My mind is intrigued by those lines.

[Marie]

You are being a true friend.

[DrD]

Dupur, sometimes the charm of writing in a language that is not yours is akin to hearing delightful accents. You capture this very common theme with a new sensitivity that I thoroughly enjoyed. My kudos on this one.

[Kurera]

friends should always support each other no matter what, good write

[J. J. Nightingale]

One hand in another .. Hearts sharing .. We can make a difference ..

Good thoughts .. Jazzy

[Blue Ivory]

This is sweet and gentle. I like it a lot! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to offer a place to release pain and sadness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ed Fagan]

very nice. what would be without an understanding soul to comfort us when its needed most?

[Raven Starhawk]

Friendship is something most people crave I think. (sorry if I spell something wrong or use the wrong words. I just woke up ^^*) Anyways it actually creates a image of a friend in need, a friend who is enduring either physical or emotional pain, but all in all it was a great write.

[Becca Bishop]

Beautiful!! I love how you encourage the friend to let you help them. This is really touching and sweet :) Good job!!!!