Friend

Friend
i know when you take your hands on my hands
when you take your eyes on my eyes

i can know you take many loans
but cannot pay back

your child has gone to the spoilt

i know your girl don't return home at the night
your wife do not want to speak you lovely

you cannot sleep at the night
i know
please take your hands on my hands
take your eyes on my eyes
and cry

only crying can make you easy
you will be more easy to speak with me

Reviews

[chea]

good one.. :)

[Dream Mistress]

loved it

[Natasha]

i think what i like about your poems is the fact that the language is a bit off- to some that may be a flaw and may annoy them--but i think it what makes your poems unique and stand out from others- i really appreciate all of your works- you are a great writer and have a way of expressing such topics so simply but still complexly

[Marissa Brazzell]

very good. i liked it a lot.

[beautiful dreamer]

pretty. i wish i had friends like that. i like your honesty

[Sid]

I found the language to be a bit confusing, but I did understand it and I like the message of this poem. It's good to have friends like you...good work!!

[JiDonnelly]

I am a little confused nevertheless its beautiful

-JiDonnelly'

[Mia]

"please take your hands on my hands
take your eyes on my eyes
and cry"
You are a wonderful friend :D

[Baby Ricochet]

Heavy doc.

[Fantasygirl46]

Great poem but grammer is a little confusing int he first three stanzas