You

You

A Poem by A. Rose
"

I'm happy as a medowlark.

"

That night you called me

Just to tell me how nice I looked

My heart started to shake

With such happiness I had never felt

 

Almost before I was able to respond

You said you had to go

The only reason you called

Was to hear my voice, just once more

 

The days that followed

Were of smiling and blushing

While thinking of you

Which is all I did

 

Everyday I wake up hoping

Hoping that I will get to see you

Or at least talk to you

That's all I want to do

 

I don't care about anything anymore

All I can think about is you

And I know you think of me

Because you have told me so

 

I can't get you out of my thoughts

With your heart of gold

Eyes as blue as the skies

And smile as wide and bright as the sun

 

I want to be with you forever

I can't wait to see

What the future holds

For you and me

© 2009 A. Rose


Author's Note

A. Rose
This is all true from the phone call to his eyes as blue as the skies and I could never be happier!

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Bee
nicely done. I have to sigh after reading this. I'm happy for you! XD

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Jon
Thats great its true, good for you:D Good job with the write, its got a good flow, and shows alot of emotion.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is wonderful and so beuatiful
Very well written and expressed.
You are very talented.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very beautiful. And from your words it seems as if these two are destined to be together. THe poem was beauiful and flowed perfectly. Excellent read.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

he really called you?!?!? that's a little sketchy, aud. anyway, nice poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Awe that is really sweet and sincere... it's those little things we do to show our love that can make the biggest difference. Love it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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