The Moment

The Moment

A Poem by Mitchell J.U.

A short breath, a long breath.
And those in between
The first breath
And the last breath.
From oblivion.
To oblivion.
Observe and admire this one breath,
So sweet.

© 2019 Mitchell J.U.


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You have just covered a lifetime in a short poem Live each breath you take to its utmost. We don't know how long we have here.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing! I like your writing style,, short and catchy... Good words :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Mitchell J.U.

5 Years Ago

Thank you! I am just glad to share my mind and it means so much to hear that you enjoyed this! We al.. read more
This one really strikes a cord with me.

Posted 5 Years Ago

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 Added on January 2, 2019
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Mitchell J.U.
Mitchell J.U.

Meridian, ID



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I want my words to be the paint and the reader's mind to be the canvas in regards to my poetic works. The purpose of these are to not create the painting of a definitive scene but instead string abstr.. more..

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