Love Fable

Love is everything you need

Be my cheer

When my eyes want to feel the glee

 

Be my strength

When my heart feels blue

 

Be my love

When my soul feels incomplete

 

Be my peace

When I need  to flush my sorrows

 

Be my fantasy

When I want to share joy

 

Be my angel

When I need a companion

 

Be my light

When I am left out in darkness

 

Be with me

Till I arrive my last tick

Cz

There after you will no longer remain my delusion

But will be much awaited solidity dressed in silver

My heavenly host 

Welcoming me in her undisturbed abode

Embracing me, holding my hand, climbing each step

Walking towards the endless committed white blanket

Where divine spirits will pour the showers of affection

And angels will sing the love songs uniting two lost souls forever…

                

Reviews

[Echoes of Eros]

Your music is so blissfully filled with love, and yes, how just one soul can transform our own. How one life can make our world flow from darkness into light. xo

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks for the praise :)

[Chirag Kumar]

This is beautiful. Classic Mitali ;)

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you Chirag

[Tomoe Tellez]

This is a very beautiful piece of writing.
"Be my fantasy
When I want to share joy" I especially liked that part.

[Mitali Shah]

thank you so much dear :)

[Tomoe Tellez]

You're welcome :).

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. I like the flow of thoughts leading to the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Kindness given and appreciation. Both are needed when love is near.
Coyote

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Coyote for the appreciation :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Be my angel
When I need a companion
Be my light
When I am left out in darkness.....

Seems like love is finding a way from heart its really amazing Mitali :)

[Mitali Shah]

thank u so much Skyfall

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend!

[AaronFreitas]

Where divine spirits will pour the showers of affection
And angels will sing the love songs uniting two lost souls forever…
I really like those last two lines. Really a perfect ending to a great write :)

[Mitali Shah]

thank u so much Aaron :)

[Robert]

A lovely piece Mitali. You seem to always have hope in you and it is a good quality to have a it shows in your writing.

[Mitali Shah]

thanks a lot Robert :)

[Braden Freeman]

This is moving and also true to my experience. I often think about an angel being with me as I navigate the oceans of life. Let us all be each other's angels. Let us all walk the divine path with a common sense of humanity.

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Braden :) for appreciating

[wordman]

beautiful thoughts,you did a great job

[Mitali Shah]

thank u so much wordman :)

[wordman]

you`re welcome