Cycle of love
A Story by
Mitali Shah
Love gives you hope
Gifted rose Petals plucked Fingers pricked Oozed heart Feels pain Regained hope Fresh start Cycle continues
© 2015 Mitali Shah
Reviews
In the light of your words, the colors of love are reawakened. And yes, nothing can give the depth of hope that love does. xo
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you Eros
I like the flow of thoughts n the words. They are true. Natural flow of things are necessary. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
I like the flow of thoughts n the words. They are true. Natural flow of things are necessary. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
9 Years Ago
Thank you Coyote for appreciating :)
9 Years Ago
You are welcome.
True love is never known if it is given up on. Thrust not your hands in the air in surrender, but thrust them out forward in an embrace.
Nice work.
Posted 9 Years Ago
True love is never known if it is given up on. Thrust not your hands in the air in surrender, but thrust them out forward in an embrace.
Nice work.
9 Years Ago
Thank you Rickm for the appreciation :) God bless
The cycle always seems to continue that's a part of life as we all know it. Well done with such few words to express your thoughts.
Posted 9 Years Ago
The cycle always seems to continue that's a part of life as we all know it. Well done with such few words to express your thoughts.
9 Years Ago
Thank you my friend Robert :) God bless
It is the way we grow and one day we will be ready for the One - having been getting ready all that time.
I loved the metaphor Mitali - very organic. Good job !! :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
It is the way we grow and one day we will be ready for the One - having been getting ready all that time.
I loved the metaphor Mitali - very organic. Good job !! :)
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much ANTO :)
Very true, I like the imagery here. As usual this is a good read
Posted 9 Years Ago
Very true, I like the imagery here. As usual this is a good read
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much Cassie
Love gives you hope- writely pointed out....nice one Mitu( Hope i can call u that, if u don't mind)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Love gives you hope- writely pointed out....nice one Mitu( Hope i can call u that, if u don't mind)
9 Years Ago
Thanks again dear
sounds like life cycles,great write
Posted 9 Years Ago
sounds like life cycles,great write
9 Years Ago
Thanks again dear :)
9 Years Ago
you`re welcome
Nothing is purer than a rose. No plant has more protection except for maybe a cactus. No flower holds more beauty more meaning than a rose. Great imagery here; thanks for sharing this poem.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Nothing is purer than a rose. No plant has more protection except for maybe a cactus. No flower holds more beauty more meaning than a rose. Great imagery here; thanks for sharing this poem.
9 Years Ago
Thanks Jen for appreciating
9 Years Ago
you're welcome; a rose is beautiful as is your poem.
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much dear :)
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Added on July 12, 2015
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Mitali Shah Mumbai, Maharashtra, India
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