Memories I still remember……

Some people and memories can never change or get replaced

Rains just brings back many memories specially the romantic one’s-

I still remember the magic that once started igniting

I still remember how an ordinary friendship blooming into love

I still remember bunking college lectures and rushing out in the rains to be with you

I still remember walking in rains holding your hand and feeling your warm palm

I still remember our first sip of coffee from the same cup followed by long sweet long conversations

I still remember the long drives with our crazy friends and at times it was just you and me.

I still remember our first kiss in rains on beach that felt just so perfect

I still remember your warmth in the blanket that I felt for the first time after the heavy pours, sharing the bowl of hot soup

I still remember many such things that are now just hidden somewhere in a corner of my heart. I wonder do you still remember anyone of these…..?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Tomoe Tellez]

I loved this poem, it made me think. "I wonder do you still remember anyone of these…..?" I guess this is the question everyone thinks about the most. Of course they remember, the real question should be, "what do you feel when you remember these?" So bittersweet and beautifully written.

[Mitali Shah]

Agree with you but sometimes people pretend as if it no longer matters. Thanks for your review :)

[Robert]

This is an emotional piece you have written Mitali. Your last line I believe is the best and its a question you might never get an answer, "I wonder do you still remember anyone of these....?"

In my opinion I think he does remember all of these, how could he not?

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Robert for giving me a hope :) God bless

[Emma K.]

Love it! I like your positive thoughts, but as a reader I'd love some roller coaster action if you get me, positive & negative to me seems to catch people's eye sorta making you wonder, but I still loved it!!🌟

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Emma. Will definitely try to bring out with your suggestion. God bless :)

[AaronFreitas]

I love these writes where we flash back and scan through memories. Good or bad they are our memories and can never be replaced. Well penned Mitali :)

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you Aaron :) People change but memories can never change

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poetry.
"I still remember many such things that are now just hidden somewhere in a corner of my heart. I wonder do you still remember anyone of these…..?"
Memories, blessings and curses. I like the flow of thoughts leading to the very nice closing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Coyote :) God bless

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Deepak Sharma]

Beautiful
so expressive...so touchy
remind me of d same memories i have
lvly

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Deepak :) God bless

[wordman]

i bet we all have those corners in our heart`s and mind

[Mitali Shah]

Yes I agree Wordman :)

[ANTO]

Its so very hard to feel that all those memories exist only in one of the participants minds and so very natural to ask these questions - which can never be answered (unless reunification happens - then they are the most asked questions I feel).
The sadness of this juxtaposes with a super-romantic montage of special moments.
Heart-breaking Mitali.
Thanks for sharing.

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much ANTO for the appreciating :) God bless

[Jamestown]

I can relate to this heartfelt piece, I wish I could answer your questions
but unfortunately I can't and I have a few of the same:(
Well penned and expressed!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much James :) God bless