Broken Dream

Few things and people are so soothing in your dreams and then you suddenly realize it can never be true and they are meant to be living only in your dreams.

 

Lost deep in my sleep

I see you in my past leap

Reality wakes me

Once again eyes moist with the weeps...

Reviews

[Arjun Singh]

I felt u, nd mst admit, not d bst feeling in d wrld...
A gd creative write,,, shrt, yt not cryptic....
Got a loooong way to go...
Keep writing...
:)

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Arjun

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

A soft and melancholic moment shared with courage and eloquence.

[Mitali Shah]

Thank u so much Jane

[Robert]

Very Touching Mitali. You are going through some emotional times right now. I have a feeling though when you look back years from now, these pieces you are writing now will be some of your best poetry.

[Mitali Shah]

thank u so much Robert

[AaronFreitas]

I have definitely experienced this my friend... not the best feeling to wake up to. Nice wording :)

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Aaron :)

[KWP]

hmmmm yeah - you know they say you don't dream when you are in deep sleep - apparently you only dream when you are floating just beneath the surface - I was having crazy dreams this week - apparently this was dues to the fact that an asteriod was flying by very close to earth ... I love my dreams ... I can learn a lot about myself from my dreams .. nice write ... thought proviking X

[Mitali Shah]

Wow your dream is simply interesting and very different from others I am sure. Thanks for appreciating. God bless. Keep dreaming, you always can do anything and everything that you want better in your dreams. Some day surely some dreams will come true.

[Jamestown]

Few words that speak loud and clear!
Well written and expressed:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much James :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You said a lot in the short poetry. Sweet dreams do leave us sad when we awake. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Coyote for reading and appreciating :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[Chirag Kumar]

The pain of the past pricks us again and again no matter how much we try to break away from it. Nice one :)

[Mitali Shah]

Very true dear. Thank you. God bless :)