Monsoon

Smell of wet sand

Heavy pours

Bright sun

Sky fills its color

Mesmerizing beauty

Pacifies my heart with delight...

Reviews

[KWP]

ahhh the monsoon ... I have only been in Mumbai once in the rains ... the smell of freshness on the streets with everyone still going about their daily business always made life seem a bit lighter to me ... nice visions here Mitali X

[Mitali Shah]

thanks KWP :)

[Mayank]

O! When it rained here (Bombay) it was such a pleasure.... good write.

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Mayank

[Chirag Kumar]

Awesome imagery. Nice choice of words. keep it up :)

[Mitali Shah]

thanks Chirag

[Jamestown]

Well written and described
Painted a nice picture in my head:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Jamestown :) Thanks a lot for you blessings too. God bless

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful description. You said a lot in so few words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks a lot Coyote. :) God bless

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[wordman]

i can see the rain,feel the sand between my toes as we look at the beautiful sky

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much wordman :) God bless

[Pratik Mishra]

Very calm and beautiful. :)

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Pratik

[Robert]

The seasonal winds of the Indian ocean makes you feel at home... lovely poem Mitali.

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Robert :) God bless

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Very nice poem my friend. Really monsoon delight's the heart of everyone....

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you Skyfall

[AaronFreitas]

Nice descriptions Mitali... provides great imagery with your words :)

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Aaron :) God bless