I wish you could.......

Few cowards are just not worth to feel blessed and fight back even after people are ready to hold their hand and fight along from the world.

I wish you could have at least tried once over so many years to chase me and knock down the phase from the moment all the nightmares walked in between us and in your life. I would have walked with you blindly through the stormy winds and never let you be alone ever. I wish you would have heard me once that I am ready to hold your hand together and we will fight back. Just for once I thought you will buck up your shoes and gather the courage to chase me back initiating the first step and bring on everything that you always wanted in life. Just one step my dear love and things would have been so different but you chose to give up, push me away from you forever and allowed the tribulations win over you.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I like the poem a lot but bot the large font. You can both hold hands and fight the tribulations together. Bravo............

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[jb]

I enjoyed reading your poetry.... :)

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks a lot Jessica for checking it out. :)

[jb]

Your welcome :) anytime....

[VV777887]

An interesting little poem this. Very dark and thoughtful

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you W777887. God bless

[Shivam Murari]

This sounds like the song "I Wish You Would" from the album 1989. Well written.

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks a lot Shivam, though havn't ever heard about the mentioned album yet your compliment means a lot... God bless

[Shivam Murari]

Welcome. :)

[Robert]

A very sad emotional piece of writing here. Well done

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks a lot Robert :)

[wordman]

you poured out your heart in this beautiful and emotional write

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks you very much wordman :)

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Chirag Kumar]

A very emotional piece of work Didi. Straight from the heart. :)

[Mitali Shah]

thank you so much dear :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Sometimes love plays with life....Nicely explained!

[Mitali Shah]

Yes agree with you. Thanks for checking out :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I think I have something for you to read. Similar to your poem...

[Mitali Shah]

Please feel free to share dear :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I did shared with you, please see its your read request. Thanks!

[Mitali Shah]

okay dear will surely check out :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Pleasure to be a friend of you!

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you again :)

[Pratik Mishra]

Very nice.............:).......................

[Mitali Shah]

thank you :)