I wish I could tell you....

A short story comprising feelings of unspoken words.

I wish I could tell you the reason of my silence.
Many things and words went unspoken and got buried inside me when I decided to walk out without telling you anything and without you asking me for an explanation to leave. Still can't figure out what kinda relationship is this where words are buried in the grave with the birth of silence haunting my departure from your life with no hope of turning back...
I wish I could tell you that I still............. (unspoken words and a mystic silence continues)

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

In the silence of your mystic words live the answers of a seeking soul, of love, joy and peace. Your words manifest the anonymous...:).....

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....

[miss_shanita]

loved it....sometimes we burry the words so deep that when we need them we can not find them. I can relate

[Mitali Shah]

thanks Miss Shanita for appreciating it :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Way way way DEEP! I am lucky to read it today, NOW! ... I can truly relate myself to every single word. Hearts are broken by many words left unspoken! :/ Amazing write dear Poetess! :)

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks a lot Dreamer for your reviews and that you too can relate and understand it. :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

U are WELCOME! :)

[Rajat malik]

Sometimes words can't express the feeling but expression can :)
I felt like this while reading it....
Simple but amazing:)

[Rajat malik]

Sometimes words can't express the feeling but expression can :)
I felt like this while reading it....
Simple but amazing:)

[Mitali Shah]

thank you so much Rajat.

[Rajat malik]

You are so much welcome, dear:)

[Ronny]

Good piece Mitali.
Silence is often the treatment of a broken relationship,
and usually one person got stronger feelings than the other.

It's difficult to not read "I still Love you" in the end,
but I'm searching for other words....

Thanks for sharing Mitali :)

[Mitali Shah]

thanks Ronny for the appreciation :)

[Mayank]

I love the brevity, short and meaningful..

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Mayank :)

[Echoes of Eros]

There truly is so much said in words unspoken; in sacred, painful silences. And here is your longing, here is your hoping and wishing, yet the silence lives on. Beautifully bittersweet. xo

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks a lot Eros :)

[....................]

A cliffhanger but I think you were going to say... 'love you' at the end... it happens sometimes, relationships die in the birth of silence (perhaps the best description I have ever read for this occurrence)... I really enjoyed this!

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks FT Ledrew for the appreciation, you caught it right :)

[Robert]

You left us with wonder and questions, those are the best poems. Well done Mitali.

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks a lot Robert :) I am happy you all liking my work. :)