Bitter End

Finally the affair came to an end

When their hearts denied to bend

Left were now only the curses of their past

When their hearts urged to cast

They had by now buried their memoirs in grave

So that the new beginnings shall now remain naive...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poetry. A complete tale in so few words.
"They had by now buried their memoirs in grave
So that the new beginnings shall now remain naive..."
I liked the above lines a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks again dear for checking out my work :) God bless

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[C]

This is a great poem. It's so profound and well-written. :)

[Mitali Shah]

thanks for checking out Chelsey :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Finally the affair came to an end
When their hearts denied to bend

Ohh, amazing lines at the start. It was very nice to read throughout. Very Deep!

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks dear glad you liked it

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend :)

[Confuser]

Mitali: Beautiful choice of words; Bitter End is a great title and the poem is lovely, so sad, such is the end of an affair, but we do learn and go on. Thank you so very much. Dale

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Dale for the appreciation :)

[Confuser]

My pleasure....Dale

[Robert]

Mitali, Your poems are short but very eloquent. You choose the right words so well. I enjoy reading your poety.

[Mitali Shah]

thanks a lot dear :)

[Gayatri neman]

wow! its really amazing!! love your poem!

[Mitali Shah]

thank you so much Gayatri

[closed]

very poignant

i really liked the poetics

it speaks alot in just a few words

awesome


-Dream

[Mitali Shah]

thanks for the apprieciation

[sushant]

good one! excellent rhyme

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks for appreciating Sushant

[AaronFreitas]

Nice work Mitali... like the topic :)

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Aaron :)

[Saddam]

Its bad, but always a way for you dear.
And we have to accept each others desires and dreams, it is very primary fact to stay in relationship.
Your last lines have great hope dear poet...

They had by now buried their memoirs in grave
So that the new beginnings shall now remain naive...

[Mitali Shah]

thanks Saddam, I know and agree its a part and parcel of life one needs to respect it.

[Saddam]

Most welcome.