Perfect Moment of Love
A Story by
Mitali Shah
Dark night, thundering clouds, they hugged.
© 2015 Mitali Shah
Author's Note
First attempt and Experiment on six words story contest.
Reviews
Good work. it takes a lot to think about 6 perfect words
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much Koudoha Essi Anne-Marie :)
9 Years Ago
you're welcome
You did well. Create place, situation and ending. A very nice poem.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
You did well. Create place, situation and ending. A very nice poem.
Coyote
9 Years Ago
I enjoyed your poetry and you are welcome.
Nice six word story. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Nice six word story. Thanks for sharing.
9 Years Ago
Thanks for the appreciation dear :)
I want that... I need a cuddle buddy! Good work
Posted 9 Years Ago
I want that... I need a cuddle buddy! Good work
9 Years Ago
thanks Aaron, hope God blesses you soon. :)
Very good Matali, they comforted each other with a hug in the dark thundering clouds. you did indeed capture the moment in 6 words.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Very good Matali, they comforted each other with a hug in the dark thundering clouds. you did indeed capture the moment in 6 words.
9 Years Ago
thanks a lot Robert :)
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Added on May 12, 2015
Last Updated on May 21, 2015
Tags:
Dark night ,
Clouds ,
Love
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Mitali Shah Mumbai, Maharashtra, India
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Love to write. After crawling, its now the time for me to learn walking in the world of content writing. Exploring myself in this journey that would enhance my writing skills and would indeed learn a..
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