Lovers Wish Twister

Lovers Wish Twister

A Poem by Mitali Shah
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Two people secretly love each other, yet they never confess but they wish God that someday they will be together and that moment comes true.

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I wish to wish you as my wish, you wish to wish as me as your wish, that always remained a wish for my wish to ask you as a wish, and wish to ask me as your wish, the wish of being forever one blossomed our wish to wish  each other as one wish.

 

© 2015 Mitali Shah


Author's Note

Mitali Shah
This is an experimental piece by me, tongue twister by lovers. Please share your views. Thanks

Meaning of tongue twist-
I wish to pray you as my wish to God - vice versa , that remained my dream wish to ask you in my prayers from God –vice versa, the wish of being forever one blossomed our wish to ask for each other as one wish.

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Really fun to read those lines, at once and all. It was really twister to twist, nice work friend!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

9 Years Ago

Thanks again dear :)
Writer at last! Sky ~

9 Years Ago

Most welcome my friend & always!
Hey nice work Didi. Out of the box thinking :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

9 Years Ago

thanks chirag
Nice experiment. I tried going as fast as I can, it's fun.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

9 Years Ago

hope you enjoyed it Mayank. thanks for appreciating
That was a tongue twister, but very interesting is two had the exact same wish. Could it come true? Who knows.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

9 Years Ago

thanks Robert, I don't it may be someone must have experienced it dear, if so God bless them and thi.. read more
This is an excellent experiment.
So wishful wish.
Great dear.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

9 Years Ago

Thanks Saddam for your appreciation :)
Saddam

9 Years Ago

Welcome always..

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Added on May 7, 2015
Last Updated on May 7, 2015
Tags: Love, Tongue Twister, Wish

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Mitali Shah
Mitali Shah

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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