I wish I could tell you the feeling

I wish I could tell you the feeling when I first saw you

It was like the sky’s blue when the day is all new,

 

I wish I could tell you the feeling when I first heard you

It was like a birds chirping view,

 

I wish I could tell you the feeling when I first touched you

It was like a magical hue,

 

I wish I could tell you the feeling when you confessed love

It was like a night full of twinkling stars above,

 

I wish I could tell you the feeling inside my heart

It was like an absolute mystic art...

Reviews

[Robert]

I so much like this poem. It totally reminds me of my love. I wrote a poem that I think you should read that I wrote, its called "When I saw your Smile". Please tell me your thought on it.

Wonderful Poem.

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks again Robert, will surely read your piece :)