Art of Love

I owe you my heart,

When you nailed on me your love dart,

Lets unite forever in this piece of art,

Come treasure this zeal of magical mart,

Where no one else can set us apart.

Reviews

[Chirag Kumar]

I loved the line,"Lets unite forever in this piece of art." Lovers cherish this dream in their hearts. Awesome piece Didi :)

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks a lot Chirag :)

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
sweet and sincere sentiment,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you James for all your blessings and appreciation. :)

[Robert]

Short, sweet, and to the point. This poem read very well and I enjoy your writing.

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Robert for appreciating and enjoying my writing :)

[Ashwin Thakur]

Sometimes its difficult to use words for a specific rhyme scheme
Forceful use of words for rhyming can sometimes ruin a wonderful poem
Belive it happens to me many times
Overall its nice and sweet:):).

[Mayank]

I liked the way you have written so well brevity, your words on mark.

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Mayank for appreciating my learning process over prose