Flatlining

She in nothing new for you. 

A bland blanket of obvious thumbsore, 

dying to get out of her house and shave 

self assured tendrils of thought flowing over her shoulder.

So close you can smell it- 

it reminds you of something you've worried over.

Reviews

[The Twin Arenas]

this is your best one.
"obvious thumbsore"

a really killer last line, as well. I like reading about something that is reminding someone of a thought, or a feeling. You're painting the edges here, and letting the reader fill the glass. Take care, killer.

[The Twin Arenas]

best poem, I mean. Not, like, "obvious thumbsore" is your best one. Good line in a piece of many.

[scarlynn]

Oh my gosh thank you so much!! Reading this really made my day, I appreciate it :)