Demon's Beginning

Demon's Beginning

A Poem by scarlynn

Staring into the face of god 
Bowing falsely 
To bite him on the nose. 

© 2016 scarlynn


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that "him" might work better as an "it." "Him" sort of adds too much of a housecoat to a piece that otherwise isn't wearing one. Good, though.

Posted 8 Years Ago


with few words the image is well painted

Posted 8 Years Ago


with few words the image is well painted

Posted 8 Years Ago


with few words the image is well painted

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on February 6, 2016
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