Magnifying Glass

Let us conjure moonlight dreams,
while you pick your memories up
out of the blue velvet,
wet lips on wood sticks
and blow.
Pretend I am your blue moon goddess,
white dress, all curves,
sleek sex siren~
dripping smooth

honey melody.

My microphone makes love
to your saxophone as
you purr and grind symphonic beats.
Eyes trickle down the small of my back,
where sequins kiss brown dimples.
Hips lightly sway
to sweet groans of
deep~ dark~ notes.
Belt me a song. Blow it hard

and long.
Every curve~ lush, vibrates
this haunt black melody.
Something I can swing with~ into the dark
with panting breathless tongues
wagging me out the door, as I
choke down your beat
like sweet poison.
Smoke wisps curl
while in the candle glow
you suck down amber on the rocks.
Try to drink it in.
Pretend it isn't just

another regret.

daddy twirled his fingers slow,
made his glass sing.

I was mesmerized.

Reviews

[Chrys]

You paint such a beautiful picture using words & wit. You have a style & a certain 'touch' that is your & yours alone. Your work makes me strive to be more thorough, & descriptive in my own writing. I believe that you are perhaps the definition of Inspirational. Well done.

[Kristina Moulaison]

Wow, I hope to live up to those words someday...thank you! :)

[Chrys]

In these eyes you have lived up to them & then some.

[Kristina Moulaison]

You are very kind. Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

A dark and lonely place in the poem. I had to read again. The words create visions of wishes and places where we find regret and memory. I like how you ended the poem. A real life ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Kristina Moulaison]

Thank you very much!

[SAYED THANGAL]

it's highly passionate and romantic, still it leads the readers to a smooth passage, never get bored as some poets describes the scenes with vulgar words and phrases,
good and standard romance,

[Kristina Moulaison]

Thank you very much!

[Jack...]

Ok, now this is out of control good. What form...so melodic and teasing...I sit hypnotized by the cadence of your words. Smooth blues curve along smoke ring dancefloors and slowly swaying lovers live within each other. Wow again...

[Kristina Moulaison]

Out of control good...:) hee hee, I'm loving that.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"daddy" again like plath that reference...

a man she feared as well as loved...and when he died, she said " i will never speak to god again"

this is so bluesy...so passionate..and then the late reference...a hint of abuse..

there are so many kinds...

"daddy twirling his fingers...

mmm "mesmerised" could be a good thing here or a bad thing...

enchanted or disenchanted.

such deep writes..i am so glad i found your page.

jacob

[Kristina Moulaison]

Jacob,
Thank you! I look forward to reading you too. I appreciate you reading and your kind words here!

[Frieda P]

I'm in awe, want to get inside your head. You're like the word wizard,
'out of the blue velvet,
wet lips on wood sticks
and blow.'
Lot's of sexual tension, and I won't even ask about that last line...yes, I am mesmerized. Haunting.

[Kristina Moulaison]

THANK you! It is very charged. :) Thanks for the kind words!

[Frieda P]

How did i miss you this entire month, your poetry is delicious like cherry pie!

[Kristina Moulaison]

LOL, thanks! I am not on here much anymore. A lot of my stuff on here is from years ago. Glad to have found you!

[.......]

Such powerful imagery in this write. Beautiful as well. Enjoyable read!

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[Shellie]

What i like about this poem is the underlying sensuality without being perverse...it was classicaly done. Also most of the phrasing is exceptional.... the way you take normal words and string them together to be so different from the way they are perceived. Its excellent.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Not sure what this is about ,but the
figure is nice, the music great and
the sweet, warm feeling creeping up
my belly tells me she is saying sensuas
stuff. Being of the male type, the throbbing
instruments and the guy tasting the amber
makes this an unforgettable read.

The clever way the writer handles her pens and
verbs suggests to me that she is a professional
with a lot of talent .

I look forward to more of her.

----- Eagle Cruagh