What You Don't Know

what you don't know is that i have cried
so many nights and so many days
i'm filled with a sadness for us both
for you, i'm afraid that i have caused you pain
for me, because i have caused myself pain
is pain all it comes down to with us
how unfair, how wrong
for before there was sunshine, a glow inside
and now nothing but rain, a storm that never ends
how do i undo it all
i ask myself everyday
and i know the answer is that i can't
but i'll wish anyway
and then someday maybe the tears will go away

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Who knows why people lose direction, why people
who once thought only of love, now think only of the
hurt. Who knows ?
This is very well written, a little melancholy, sad, but
it is a poem well written.
Suggestion: Head your poems and stories with an icon, a picture,
or a drawing, something that heads up the writing---- a symbol.
The experts tell me it gets attention to your writing.
This is good !
My Rate: 100%
---- Eagle Cruagh