Missing You

i'm always missing you
longing for you touch
warm against me and so alive
i could feel your heart
smell your smell
i want to memorize those moments
the ones when we touch
and even the ones when we don't
as soon as we part i'm empty
but smiling still at the fading memory
i want you again and again
each time longer and stronger
closer and closer
how easy i think it would be to just kiss your neck
but then again, it is so hard
there is a conflict between my heart and my head
and in your's too, i know
but that, at least, won't stop me from feeling
and i don't think anything can stop me from
missing you.

Reviews

[WordMaster]

A wonderfully written poem

Your word selection and pace are just right for this topic

I can feel the words describe the feeling you are trying to express

Nice work!