Even Now

Father, I’m here on my knees.

I’m asking you to be near me.

These trials seem to never end.

It’s so hard to trust you have a perfect plan.

God, I’m so desperate, so weak, so unworthy

More than ever, I need you to help me.

But I’ll raise my hands and give you praise.

I’ll still praise you through my pain.

For who am I that you should owe me anything?

You are able to be my everything.

Sustainer, Healer, Faithful Friend,

I’m surrendering yet again.

I’m yours, my life is in your hands,

Not just part of me, but all that I am.

Jesus, do what you will.

Even now, I’ll trust you still.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

it's a very great "healing" poetry that itself speakin' the heart. today, i see there's so much pain around the world that's costing many "hearts", & love's seemed to be one of the major reasons behind that, perhaps, more importantly, more than love, there's something else that's keeping life so far from "peace", and it's called "disturbance" -- the disturbance of mind. once the state of mind's balanced or we have some control on mind, everything's all settle or will be resettled in life. very deep and philosophical poetry! i kinda like the theme of your shorten words so drilled with some "quality" of thoughts.

looking forward to reading your work!

[Molly M]

Thank you for your kind reviews. :) I actually just happened to log in here for the first time in years! I haven't written any poems in a long time but if you have any interest in blogs i'm over at mollymadeira.wordpress.com for now.

[Tate Morgan]

Nice to feel fulfilled

[Blue Eyes]

this is really, really good.

[Kelly M.]

You are a talented poem writer! And it's so true.... we can stand strong in hard times like the ones we all have sooner or later. Keep up the great work!!

[darkgurl]

This is a powerful write. Very well written.

[Steve]

very nice. keep up the good work

[ChristianM]

This was beautiful and nearly brought me to tears.
We fall short of the Glory of God but He always welcomes us back into His arms.
Amen again

[Angel Veselinov]

another great prayer i am going to start reading those often just to feel good :) thanks for sharing

[Ashleyx]

POWERFUL! I loved it! this is very realistic and sounds like it could be somebody's own thoughts, yet has parts of it that give it more elegance. The only suggestion i would make is to try italicizing some words to give them more emphasis, but thats just my preference. Kudos my friend! Keep it up! :)

[Gheeneil]

I liked the combination of beautiful words and wonderful thoughts here. The mood and tone went so well together. I wish we all could be that submissive to the Father. Thanks for sharing.