routine

routine

A Poem by hanzabonanza

I make my bed

smoothing out the creases

of where his body lay

his scent more stubborn


I wash my face

from all his untruths

which cling to my eyelashes

like morning sleep


I clean my nails

from his fragments

the doomed Lady

washing, rubbing, erasing


I sweep the floor

collecting his tears

like pearls in my hand

from a broken necklace


I extinguish

the gleam of his eyes

with thumb and index

snuff

out goes the flame

© 2013 hanzabonanza


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Excellent. It has... possibilities. Why is he crying? Did she leave? Or, is she just imagining it to be that way? It has a sense of sadness with a resilient and resolute determination with just a hint of vengeful finality.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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hanzabonanza
hanzabonanza

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