old flame

old flame

A Poem by hanzabonanza

chose cheeks over lips

but your eyes still darted down

come stray back with me

© 2012 hanzabonanza


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An old flame from a zippo you once that flat, like a smile an wink. nice work

Posted 11 Years Ago


Like it especially the first line loved that one. A short but powerful poem. Well done:).

Posted 11 Years Ago


ah, those pauses for effect

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on December 19, 2012
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hanzabonanza
hanzabonanza

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