Beautiful Bio-Hazard

Beautiful Bio-Hazard

A Poem by Mellisa
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A poem about a girl lost in this world.

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Her composure is broken.
She twists and turns,
all sharp edges and burns,
her eyes an infectious fire.
She dances without a care
and lives in a world with nothing;
she doesn't know about rules.
She acts so happy
when she really is so sad.
She doesn't know who she is
or what she is. 
She doesn't know how to control herself.
It scares her.
She hurts herself,
She hurts others,
She's as volatile as the plague,
as biologically insane
as a cancer of the brain.
Under the stars,
even the most gruesome of sicknesses
become beautiful bio-hazards.
You love her, don’t you?
Why don’t you tell her?
Before its too late.
It could save her life.

© 2012 Mellisa


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I get from this piece the idea that acceptance is something both wanted and needed in life. One is more than just a shell, more than just actions. They are the sum of all the little attributes, many of which will be kept behind closed doors.

I liked the flow and the descriptive images you wove into this work of ink. It really brought home a strong message.

Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mellisa

12 Years Ago

Thank you, I am glad that the point that I was trying to get across made it's way.



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The poem advocates strongly about loving a person at proper time.
I adore your gesture.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I get from this piece the idea that acceptance is something both wanted and needed in life. One is more than just a shell, more than just actions. They are the sum of all the little attributes, many of which will be kept behind closed doors.

I liked the flow and the descriptive images you wove into this work of ink. It really brought home a strong message.

Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mellisa

12 Years Ago

Thank you, I am glad that the point that I was trying to get across made it's way.
truly beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mellisa

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
Kerri Hart

12 Years Ago

no problem

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