He's gone.

I feel so weak

so useless and forgotten

no where in ths world am i needed

now that you are gone

that thought makes me sick to my stomach

that your gone....

possibly never to come back agian

to never love me again

it makes me wanna cry

so many tears, so much blood

you will never be forgotten in my mind.

Author's Note

I'm curently going through a break up. I know everyone goes through them, and my break up sure isnt one of the worst but I miss him. I don't think he realizes that I'd rather be depressed with him, then happy without him.

Reviews

I know that everybody says that break-ups are just a part of everyday life, and that you have to move on, but to be honest, it just doesn't always work like that.
I think that if most folks can just move on after a break-up happens, then what they had with that person wasn't really real. or just simply not strong at all.
so I say they ought to just shut their faces ahaha.

because I still haven't moved on, and it happened back at the beginning of February.

[Damie]

wow this is a great poem :) and hope you feel better soon VoV :3

[Dutch Jr.]

Break ups are hard, for either side. I think writing about it help you get over it. Nice wok.

[Justin Street]

Your right, everyone does go through break ups, but I'm pretty sure this short/great work can resonate with anyone who has went through a serious relationship. good job

[X]

this is..... sad, i cant think of a word for it. the meaning is truly deeper than than words may express and its compacted into this poem. i love it

[zappy]

break ups are hard but its best to move on i did like this its great