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Hey, just to let you know, the word "insane" in insane asylum didn't entirely type. As another improvement to the summary, you don't need to give Christian's. mother's name in the summary as that will undoubtedly be revealed in the story itself. In the last sentence, stick to either present tense (comes instead of came) or past tense (showed instead of shows.) We definitely want a grammatically immaculate summary since a lot of people will instantly scroll past if they see errors- they will assume the story is the same.





The idea itself sounds intriguing! Looking forward to reading

Posted 10 Years Ago

Hey keke, i read the first chapter. It is presented so simply. But i didnt get the story. Write more chapters and also do a lot of reading....ALL THE BEST..

Posted 10 Years Ago

Hey, just to let you know, the word "insane" in insane asylum didn't entirely type. As another improvement to the summary, you don't need to give Christian's. mother's name in the summary as that will undoubtedly be revealed in the story itself. In the last sentence, stick to either present tense (comes instead of came) or past tense (showed instead of shows.) We definitely want a grammatically immaculate summary since a lot of people will instantly scroll past if they see errors- they will assume the story is the same.





The idea itself sounds intriguing! Looking forward to reading

Posted 10 Years Ago