You're the only one for me

 

 

 

Curled up together on this hard, bare floor,

With a blanket wrapped around us,

A warm feeling starts to unfurl.

My face in your neck hides my shy grin,

As my thoughts go back to the love we just made

Again, and again.

Your skin is so warm as I nuzzle your cheek.

I pray this moment never ends,

That we never fall asleep!

As your arms slip around me,

My heart skips a beat.

Our eyes drift shut,

Neither of us speak.

I give you one last kiss,

And whisper, soft and sweet,

"I love you, baby...

You're the only one for me."

 

Author's Note

Okay, so maybe my rhyming isn't perfect...but oh well. ^.^ I love this piece irregardless. I hope you will too!!

Reviews

[Devon]

How beautiful, Very good bunnie love

=)

[Surrealstorm]

I think this is a wonderful piece! Who cares about Rhyming! This is sweet and emotional. Just reading it makes me think of how I feel when i'm curled up against my husband.

"I pray this moment never ends"

Like there's nothing else in the entire world that's better or more perfect. great write!

[Nontani]

I love this too! It's so sweet. I don't think anyone wants these types of moments to end. They're just too precious.

Frozen Angel

[Eye0fthebeh0lder]

I actually really like your rhyming, I thought this piece was really good.
Keep up the great work.

[Thomas B. Buckman]

I love this. It its heartfelt, a piece of your soul imprinted in text.

[Dillon Cotter]

good flow and imagery as well. can feel the warm sensation and passion in this write, well done.

-Will

[Jasmarine]

*sigh* very good, made me smile and feel all warm and fuzy inside. i dont get that feeling very often so congrats on a job well done! its very touching too. i read in a cosmo that guys hate to be cuddled after the 'deed' and want their space. im sure thats not true for every guy, sounds kinda dumb to me but whatever. regardless i like the underlying emotions the couple feels and you can sense it there.

anyways, i liked it. defianately one of my favourites :)

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

What a delightful poem incapsulating all that is refreshing about the special bond of two lovers realising love's young dream,the only thing that is missing is a nice open roaring fire and a toast before the serious business of making mad passionate love begins i truly madly and very deeply love this poem.

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a beautiful, tender moment captured perfectly with your flowing words. The piece even seems to slow as you drift off into dreams... Wonderful write full of love and life!

[Domo]

In a way this was intense, which isn't a bad thing, just adds more character to the poem and its content.
Nice poem, and keep it up.
~D♥m♥~