For Sure, it's the Shore!

For Sure, it's the Shore!

A Poem by .Bunnie.
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^.^ Me being goofy and hyper.... :-S Beware.

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While I was down by the shore,
Getting ready for a chance to explore,
I suddenly realized I'd been there before.
Yes, I'm sure, on this exact shore!
It was quite a lure, and I wanted to see more,
But I was particularly unsure
Of which PART of the shore
I wanted to see, and why for.
But for you, I assure,
I will explore.
^.^ Yes, I will explore,
For sure, for sure!

© 2009 .Bunnie.


Author's Note

.Bunnie.
This is the result of too much sugar and a very over-stressed day.... One finally snaps and becomes a nerd. Of course, if you were already PREVIOUSLY a nerd, this condition is only worsened further......for sure!! :P

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Funny little piece of trickery and wordplay. Amusing, though not as impressive as some of your other works. Clearly, an exercise for fun and to blow off some steam.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This all in all was a great poem. I also have to admit you're the coolest, and most beautiful, nerd I've ever met.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I agree with Denni, this poem is cute.
I possitively loved the rhyme scheme, and the meaning of this poem.
~D♥m♥~

Posted 15 Years Ago


This was such a fun, vivid, lifting write. Your words play and pounce perfectly!

Posted 15 Years Ago


i like this, if i was a dog i would wag my tail now.

Posted 15 Years Ago


haha this is cute! i like it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I Love This!! Such wit, and zang and zip.. hyper? Well it turned out damn fine.. I say load up on the sugar girl.. This is just a wonderful, lighthearted read. I can see reciting this to some kids and having them try to recite it as well. Good Jb!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The picture at the bottom is just perfect for the poem. I loved the playful nature of it, and how it just seemed to bounce with every couple of words. Being goofy and hyper can result in lots of fun and smiles....nothing wrong with that. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hahahaha! That is incredible! Once again I love the use of the cute little emoticon in there as if you're just making sure we remember how cute you are. ^_^

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

LMAO... well I must say you are the sexiest nerd I have seen. Hell I admit I am one too. Must be why I love this so much... it is quite funny and witty... flows right off the tongue and tickles the funny bone... Can't help but smile reading this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Belvidere, IL



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