For Sure, it's the Shore!

For Sure, it's the Shore!

A Poem by .Bunnie.
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^.^ Me being goofy and hyper.... :-S Beware.

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While I was down by the shore,
Getting ready for a chance to explore,
I suddenly realized I'd been there before.
Yes, I'm sure, on this exact shore!
It was quite a lure, and I wanted to see more,
But I was particularly unsure
Of which PART of the shore
I wanted to see, and why for.
But for you, I assure,
I will explore.
^.^ Yes, I will explore,
For sure, for sure!

© 2009 .Bunnie.


Author's Note

.Bunnie.
This is the result of too much sugar and a very over-stressed day.... One finally snaps and becomes a nerd. Of course, if you were already PREVIOUSLY a nerd, this condition is only worsened further......for sure!! :P

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It is a very good poem. Made me laugh. Photo made words come alive. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Adorable. Having the picture to go with the piece really puts you there. I always feel like that when I visit the beach. But there are just soooo many spots to revisit! D:

Posted 15 Years Ago


Hey great write. When i red it i tough that the best name for this is Deja Vu :) This write really gives me a feeling like you get deja vu at the shore. :) Really nice i am looking forward to read some of your stories and book :)

P.S. Not only good looks but great writing what a profound combination :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


I really really like this. It is short, and sweet. Beautiful.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This was so cute i loved it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Lol it was quite interesting... hahaha in an odd sort of way... but I think it may be just be me, lol

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love the play on words here and the humor was great. I feel a free spirit sort of person as I read this. I think the dog put an extra spin on this. Glad I stopped by to read your work.

Antony

Posted 15 Years Ago


Lots of sure and shore references here not sure whether to take this poem with a pinch of salt or a bucket at least it had rythum and i can see you smiling when you composed it quite corny but imaginative nethertheless i'll give you 7/10 for effort.

Posted 15 Years Ago


hahaha, nice, colorful, whimsical, like honestly feels like a day at the beach, in all subtlety youve captured
fun and free spirited nature, i enjoyed the zest, the appeal, transporting and cute, talented

Posted 15 Years Ago


haha Cute (: Nice read.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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