Alone

Nobody wants me,

everybody hates me,

I feel so alone.

There’s no where to turn,

“sorry sucker”

I’ve been burned.

Deep down my soul screams,

begging to be found,

I hate the thought of loneliness,

my mind dwells with empty sounds.

I can hear the echo of my pulse,

filling the holes in my brain,

every breath I take in,

my blood rushes as it numbs the pain.

I’m stuck in the same place,

the place where this all began,

I’m blocked by a barbed wire fence,

missing the turn to a safe land.

I don’t know where I fit,

I’ve lost my balance to stand,

my veins are filled with cold air,

I can’t reach your hand.

Losing my sense of consciousness,

I vomit up my own words,

my thoughts are giving me a headache,

the point to living seems curbed.

I am alone,

my body is left to rot,

hot tears stream down my face,

I can’t even bare the thought.

Reviews

[David]

This was written very well. I loved the whole thing. The rhyming was well put together. Nothing seemed out of place, or "forced" as sometimes poems can be. All I can say is that I enjoyed reading this and hope to read other pieces by you very soon. Keep up the good work.
-David-

[Frank F. Atanacio]

Super write super

[Craig]

Graet poem. Loneliness is when your best friend is your pen. Like me. 80)

[Jera]

i really liked this, very well put!

[Jeffrey]

this one is amazing!
and so well written

[J.Black]

Filled with emotion and such haste.