Don't

Don’t leave me to go back to her.
Don’t say you love her,
when we both know the truth.
Don’t walk away.
Don’t pick a fight.
Don’t wrestle me off,
I’ll hold you back with all my might.
I’m torn between your selfish decisions,
and my horrible mistakes.
I’ve lost my sense of direction,
I’m full of shame and hate.
I wish that you could see what’s right,
because you don’t know what is.
If I could show you my heart,
I would,
you’d see that it’s torn apart,
and that I’ve lost the will to live.
Don’t look into my eyes,
telling me that this is goodbye.
Don’t make the wrong choice.
Don’t make me cry.
Don’t lie to me,
when I already know,
Never say never,
when you don’t plan on letting go.

Reviews

[just is]

Such raw emotion here, i can feel the pain in this, well written and well said.

[Jenny-Jen-Jen]

Simply Beautiful. That's all I can say. :]

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very painful write... straight forward and raw emotions... thats the truest words of the heart.

[J.Black]

Damn, this was so hard to swollen... never mind, digest!

[---]

this went deep down...great job. I can sense your longing....

[Frank F. Atanacio]

wow-- don't--- I could sense this poem right down to my bone... Good job