Vodka Martini

I carefully hold your stem in between my fingers,

as your liquid sloshes inside your glass.

A maraschino cherry lies at the bottom,

as the drinks are carefully passed.

We clink our glasses together,

as we casually laugh.

I rest my lips upon your edge,

and tilt what’s left of you inside my mouth.

You numb my soul,

I love the way you taste.

I want another one,

I could never let you go to waste.

Reviews

[just is]

I love the way you taste.
I want another one,
I could never let you go to waste.

Love these lines right here, this is a sensual write here.

[Michael X]

this is sensuously written and expressed with streamy, subtle passion and desire, enticing and tantalyzing
in flow and structure, a fun and creative work to ponder

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Never had a vodka martini myself but you make it sound rather inviting... I am more of a beer guy myself...

very nicely done... shows you can write bout anything and make it entertaining.

[Legion]

shaken not stirred please :) Simplistic and excellently executed. Never wanted a drink more. Bravo.

[poetic soul]

simple act, beautiful expression..
loved this poem.. it was an excellent read and a soothing one too..

:)

Regards,
Poetic Soul