You Don't Know

You Don't Know

A Poem by Amy

You don’t know what you’ve got,

until you lose it.

You don’t know what it feels like to be lonely,

until you sleep alone for the first time in years.

You don’t know what true love feels like,

until it gets ripped out of your hands.

You don’t know what the words “I love you” feel like,

until the one you're destined to be with tells you on your wedding day.

There are worse things in life to cry over, so don’t claim to know these things,

because you simply just don’t know.

© 2009 Amy


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you dont know what you have got ..you dont me ..until you lose me
then you will never know..how lonely it feels
to sleep your nights alone ..first time in years
you will never know what true love feels
till you got ripped out of my hands..alone to the wild world
lovely words..wonderful feelings
just wonderful


Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Well I new this already!! lol notttt!!
I love the way you wrote this piece.
You grab my eye ball to the paper so I would know what it felt like to
know an amazing writer as yourself!!
As alway...Beautiful and real

Love Ya girl,
Anna

You don't know what true love feels like,
until it gets ripped out of your hands

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So true...but you can't miss what you never had, no?

Lovely write. It was very passionate to the point were I could almost see you yelling at me if I dared to say "I know". Also the way you set the lines up was great; it paused in all the right places.

Wonderful job..

Always,
-Aurelia Mirella

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

So there is things I dont know.... but there is alot that I do know.
Either way awesome write, and holy s**t Im on this before I needa go to school...... terrible.


Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh how true, you don't know what you got till it's gone... we humans take so much advantage of what we have and that is what causes us to lose it... especially with love, you should show that person everyday how much you love and appreciate having them around or it can fade away... it just takes simple gestures everyday.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

you dont know what you have got ..you dont me ..until you lose me
then you will never know..how lonely it feels
to sleep your nights alone ..first time in years
you will never know what true love feels
till you got ripped out of my hands..alone to the wild world
lovely words..wonderful feelings
just wonderful


Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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