Used

I’m broken,

shattered,

my pieces scattered all over the ground.

In pain,

barely breathing,

my heartaches,

nothing feels the same.

I’m undone,

burned out,

I have been thrown away,

finished.

I’m timing out,

lost in time,

my clock stopped ticking,

I’ve fallen to the ground.

I no longer work,

I’m not good enough for you,

I’m losing blood,

I now see the truth.

I feel so cold,

I’m underappreciated,

an object to you,

nothing but a lie,

used.

Reviews

[LSS]

I love the way you have used the short phrases to say the most. You seem to be analyzing your pain from many different angles to get the best perspective of what troubles you. Well done, I've seen this poetry form before and it always impresses me in its potency, as it is able to crack the veneer that covers up most issues.
LSS

[J.Black]

Emo-ish lmao!
But still it does get the message across and I liked it cause you know, I love everything you do Amy!