Losing Grip

So I was a little angry...haha!

This could be it,

I need to face this.

I can’t fight you any longer.

You’re impossible.

I shouldn’t have to care.

As I walk away,

I don’t even know how to leave you.

I’m starting to slip,

I’m losing my grip.

I’m by myself, again.

I’m the sacrifice,

yet you’re the one that walks away,

blind as a bat.

I wish you could see me,

but I know that you don’t give a crap.

I’m crying,

screaming,

bleeding for you,

I’m swearing,

I’m caring,

there’s nothing more to do.

You’re deaf,

selfish,

greedy,

and a low-life prick.

All I ask of you is to think with your brain,

but you’d much rather think with your dick.

Go,

if this is what you want.

I’ll eventually loose faith,

you’ll screw yourself over,

and then we’ll see who the real loser is.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

this is love Amy..blind love
you said you cant fight him any more
he is impossible ..you should not care if he walks away but you do .. but you do not even know how to leave
why do i think thats typical of you..
dreamers..ha ha.. could never hurt anyone.. always a victom as you say
a nail rather than a hammer..thats how they are dear
You're impossible.
I shouldn't have to care.
As I walk away,
I don't even know how to leave you.
I'm starting to slip,
I'm losing my grip.
I'm by myself, again.
I'm the sacrifice,
wonderful Amy ..nice write..really enjoyed it

[J.Black]

WOW! It's like you wrote this for me, hahaha. Yeah I can so relate. At the moment I'm pissed at love, actually no, I'm pissed at me not allowing myself to be loved. Anyways, I felt your anger amy, you PMSING woman!

[Jessica]

That was so good. It's better to release your anger in words on a page than physical violence. and you even feel good afterwards when you've created something good out of your anger and negative energy.

[Jennifer Pennington]

indeed you were quite angry...but the pain and frustration definitely showed in this very well written piece. Nice job!