When You Kiss Me

 

 

 

 

When you kiss me,

I know you miss me,

the way you hold me,

the world just floats away.

When you kiss me,

I know you want me,

the way you hug me,

makes me feel safe inside.

When you kiss me,

I know you love me,

the way you look at me,

it all makes perfect sense.

when you kiss me...

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh Amy I just love the flow of your words,this is a simple love poem ,but your typical touch and feeling i swear i could tell it was you even if i did not read who wrote..
the way you hold me,
the world just floats away.
When you kiss me,
I know you want me,
the way you hug me,typical of you ,sweet tender,very tender words,i feel its like a tender love hiding away from a world that may steal it,so you are hiding it,i wish the feeling is true..
wonderful write..

[Arthur Crow]

The magick of a kiss is all described here in your sincere and passionate expressions.. this flows beautifully and your tender words are food for the soul :)

[J.Black]

.. So kiss me.

LOL!
Sounds like my poem its understandable, I'm your inspiration, bahaha.

Anyways, this was really good !