Hanging By a Thread

I’ve lost my soul,

I’ve lost my pride,

I lost so many things that I know and love.

Look at me,

look at what I’ve done,

I can no longer face the challenges of life,

I’ve come undone.

I’m so tired of looking at my feet,

all the secrets that I keep.

My heart is barely pumping,

I feel half dead.

I try to hang on to what I have left,

all the nights I’ve barely slept,

my heart is barely hanging by a thread...

Reviews

[Bridgett]

wow! this is awesome! I really like this a lot

[J.Black]

"I'm so tired of looking at my feet,
all the secrets that I keep.
My heart is barely pumping,
I feel half dead." --- can TOTALLY relate to this, my goodness amy!

It's pretty dark gotta say, and honestly I hang by a thin thread, it's guna break any moment now!!!

[~angelalala~]

i really love this poem. so dark & melancholy. how i can relate. it seems all of us are hanging on by a thread. "I've lost my soul,

I've lost my pride," these are my favorite lines. a simple, short poem, but darkly beautiful with a heartbreaking touch of defeat.

[bluessadmood]

oh Amy how nice this is,how wonderful
you tell me of a state i know every one could have seen
where across one never expected scene
you feel you have lost things inherent inside
like you are no more the same..pretty shame
I've lost my soul,
I've lost my pride,
I lost so many things that I know and love.
Look at me,
look at what I've done,
I can no longer face the challenges of life,
i really liked all the lines so dreamy so wonderful ,i see you back to your magic
how wonderful