Lose Control

 

 

 

Another day

Always treated the same

Trying to focus on my work

Yet, I’m the one to blame?

I hear your loud voice,

it is beaten inside my head,

I can’t talk to you anymore,

nothing can ever be said.

Your screams ring in my ears,

my head is pounding from all the tears.

Why can’t you just get some help?

Why disturb us all?

Your anger has taken over you,

and has now controlled us all...

Reviews

[J.Black]

Ah, very nice amy.

[*SacredWriter*]

Very Nice write! A pleasure to read!

[Wildecat]

Why can't people just live and let live, nice writing Amy I really liked this poem.

[Last Lying Look]

II like this piece. A lot.
I find this really relatable. People always have to contaminate everyone else with their anger.
What's that saying?... Misery loves company.
Excellent piece.
-E.M.R