Blind

They say those who are blind, have a stronger sense of hearing,

where they already can hear the sound of you breathing.

 

They say those who are blind, have a strong sense of smell,

for when you are around them,

they can smell your sweet honey shampoo.

 

They say those who are blind, have a strong sense of touch,

you don’t even have to tell them,

they just feel and recognize your soft skin.

 

They say those who are blind, have a strong sense of taste,

give them a meal, and they’ll appreciate it, and know what it is.

 

So then why is it, that those who are blind can pick up on things quicker?

When I’ve known you for so long, and you can’t even see me...

 

Reviews

[Cคɾเ&#..]

That was really good. You incopirated truth of something completely differant into your feelings and thoughts. BRAVA! Very Creative...100 points 4 ya!

[Daniel]

This was wonderful. Great writing. I love how you use all the senses in this piece and then find a way to twist the outcome to fulfil the purpose you intended in the very last line. =D

[-Aurelia Mirella]

Awww!

This is so sweet but sad at the same time!

It is really well written, and your point is made very cearl.

I have a friend who is blind, and I'm sure he'll love to hear this! Thanks for sharing! I enjoyed it a ton. :]

Always,
-Aurelia Mirella

[J.Black]

I LOVED THIS. I AM PUTTING IT IN MY FAVS SISTER!

[Last Lying Look]

This is a sad piece but really good.
I really like it. You state a wonderful concept here.
Excellent work.
-E.M.R