Moondance

 

 

 

The glow of the moon shines bright upon the clear glass lake,

As we dance across the shoreline,

You spin me around in careful circles,

I feel the warmth of the night kiss my skin,

My bare feet leave faint footprints in the moistened sand,

I follow you, for you lead the way,

to a place where I never imagined I'd ever be,

our bodies are perfectly in sync,

to the unchained melody of love,

you pull me in closer,

and sway me from side to side,

I hear the waves crash against the forbidden sea,

and smell the sweet salty water,

I breath everything in,

as we dance across the shore...

Reviews

[J.Black]

"you pull me in closer,
and sway me from side to side,
I hear the waves crash against the forbidden sea,"

BEST LINES AMY!
Yeah so this poem is about me and you and your undying love for me right? Yeah figures. *blushes* LOL!

Anywho, back to the real buzz, this was tight. I loved the mood and atmosphere you created. Brilliant.

[bluessadmood]

you know dear i had to come back,these words were so nice and tender full of love full of magic,i read this maybe ten times,and i still want to read it more,its very nice very enchanting to read...
As we dance across the shoreline
You spin me around in careful circles,
I feel the warmth of the night kiss my skin,
My bare feet leave faint footprints in the moistened sand,
I follow you, for you lead the way,
to a place where I never imagined I'd ever be,
you pull me in closer,
and sway me from side to side,
I breath everything in,
as we dance across the shore...
oh dear ,such love such magic ,i swear i never read so much tenderness in these words for a long time
you took my head off,i just loved every word ,every meaning ,i could see that sweet shore ,and you bare foot leaving tiny footprints ,and follow him for her leads your way ,in harmony,for there is so much love,i am sure...

[bluessadmood]

God this is so wonderful,some more, more tender love words
enchnting so magical they are
i was taken by so much sweetness...
As we dance across the shoreline,
You spin me around in careful circles,
I feel the warmth of the night kiss my skin,
I follow you, for you lead the way,
to a place where I never imagined I'd ever be,
you pull me in closer,
and sway me from side to side,
I hear the waves crash against the forbidden sea,
i loved every word,so tender emotions ,once again you sing to my ears
this is so wonderful