Trend.

When lovers change as fast as trends. Take a number, your time will come. Walk hand in hand on street curbs and pretend that it makes you fearless. Pretend to be in love. And when it is over, cut off your hair and change your name. Start a new life because the one you have doesn't seem satisfactory. Look over all that you have been given, for it is useless. Forget past experiences because they were meant to teach lessons that you refuse to learn. Forget everyone you have ever been in love with because they are no longer a part of your life and never should have been. Ignorance. And when you finally realize it, it will be too late. She won't wait for you. She is already in the arms of a boy who speaks the words that everyone thinks and leaves unsaid for fear of being right, puts them to music, and takes her breath away.  Scream until yours leaves you as well and go to her. Tell her everything and she will not care. Because you don't matter anymore, you are out of style.

Reviews

[Aldora Sparrow]

Very nice. I think you really decribed the way people treat others when the relationship is over and I agree because I have seen it over and over among my friends.
For some (hopefully) good feedback, I think this would work better as a poem, probably freestyle.
Overall, good work for your first one and I hope you found this helpful

[C K.]

I feel the same as Sparrow, shows the pessimistic side of love, the fake kind, the way that after you think you love one person you meet another and they're twice as good as the first ever was. Awesome ending too. Is this your first piece of writing or your first piece to put up? Either way I like it a lot :) Ckx