Lost In wonderland

It's sortive about drugs like when you get high,and escape reality.

Lost In wonderland

By Ivonne Lizarraga

I'm sitting in a corner  while I'm watching the clouds pass by in the blue sky.As I inhale the green smoke from an herb.Which calms my senses,and take me away from myself just for awhile.

 

To a place where I escape reality. A place where i can hide,and get lost in forever.and yet this unusual peaceful place never escapes my mind. Reality is just so dull,and wasted. My thoughts are dead without no sense of escape from reality.When I take a puff my mind is opened to a better place. I'm in More relaxed,and peaceful state of mind without care in the world.

 

This is the place where I'd surely like to get lost in forever ,and never comeback from this place I call  wonderland. Where everything is unusual,and you feel,and  see things that can't be explained. Yet it's all wonderful in wonderland.

 

Yet i also feel lost,and confused.then i get that i just found myself, and suddenly my mind is opened up in so many ways. yet i will always comeback to get lost in wonderland.

 

After all my mind will always be lost in wonderland forever. cause your mind can be an illusion to what your mind sees.

 

Author's Note

I've tried using the best grammar i can.

Reviews

[Taylor H]

Fix your spacing after ever comma and period in these lines (and capitalize your i's)---

I'm sitting in a corner while I'm watching the clouds pass by in the blue sky.As I inhale the green smoke from an herb.Which calms my senses,and take me away from myself just

To a place where I escape reality. A place where i can hide,and get lost in forever.and yet this unusual peaceful place never escapes my mind. Reality is just so dull,and wasted. My thoughts are dead without no sense of escape from reality.When I take a puff my mind is opened to a better place. I'm in More relaxed,and peaceful state of mind without care in


place I call wonderland. Where everything is unusual,and you feel,and see things that

Yet i also feel lost,and confused.then i get that i just found myself, and suddenly my mind

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

I can see that its easy to hide in that herbal retreat. I found that escape as well when I was young. Well written with
one exception, when you use the letter i as a word it should be I. Still well done.
Hugs Debby

[Guardian]

Very interesting and unique. I liked it. Interesting orgainization as well.