meant to be a song... but, ok. Title: Remember?

just a song-ish thing i wrote... idk

Do you remember my name... how i remember you're gone... as i sit here- wonderin' why, you had to move on...

Do you feel it inside... are you wonderin' why... why i feel the same way too?

why i used to think that i needed you...

well i do...

Wake me up in the morning, with assurance you're there, with the birds singin' around us, and the sun in your hair...

And we'll go for a walk down, by the river so deep, and i'll tell you how much, how, much you mean to me... but in a second you're gone... and i feel so alone... and i am wonder-ing.

If you remember my name... how i remember you're gone... as i sit here and wonder why, you had to move on...

Do you feel it inside... are you wonderin' why... why i feel the same way too...

Why i used to feel the same way too...

Why i used to think that i needed you...

its not true...

And i hoped that one day, you would come back and say, that you were thinking about- me too.

Yeah we had our problems but they, faded away, cuz they can't compare to what i felt that day... But i know that you're gone, and i will try to move on... and forget what had happened with you...

Because...

You won't remember my name... and I'll forget that you're gone

but this song'll tell ya i'm moving on...

and you'll feel it inside, but I, won't wonder why... cuz i used to feel the same way too...

but now i know that i'll never need you...

So don't remember my name, and just keep moving on... and you'll have to admit you were wrong...

that you shouldn't be my, my reason to cry... cuz now i can find someone new... but they could never replace one of you...

Author's Note

idk about a friend who moved away a while ago... who hasn't really kept in touch, and its been kinda hard... <3

Reviews

[darkgurl]

This is a sincere write here. I can feel the emotion enter twine.

[Misfit By Choice]

yeah, TT, i agree with you... i'm not the best with music lol... :D

[TTBoy28]

I definitely feel this! Though it's not, I think, to be read/sang at a slow pace, it's very good! Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

[Truly Ross-Wisehart]

I could hear a melody as I read this. I think that you were to actually set about putting it to music, you would have a very nice song here. Good work.

~True

[TidgeTiger]

I enjoyed reading this, it has a nice sense of flow and melody to it, so you wrote well thinking of a song. :) music is one of the best ways to share an emotion, thanks for sharing some of your feelings through this poem/song :)

[Night Edge]

Lovely, lovely, lovely song.
You can really feel the emotion in it. I can almost imagine somebody on a stage, strumming a guitar, lonely and quiet, while the tears roll down my face and into my double whip strawberry frappachino with sprinkles.
A waste of money, yes, but certainly not my time.

Gorgeous work, my dear, and I simply can't wait to hear more from you. Keep up the good work!