Alone In MalmoA Poem by Doughere's an example of a poem with concrete nouns in every line
She forgot black eyeliner was still on While taking off knee high socks To walk across the winter cold floor, Hoping hallway lights won’t wake him Into late night breast groper. The bedroom walls look blue As she slides under a white comforter. She misses closed dorm days When Patrick still shaved his beard And would notice club night make up. © 2008 Doug |
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Added on April 6, 2008 AuthorDougSacramento, CAAboutOne night while I was asleep I had the words, "Veni, Vidi, Vici" repeating in my head. All night this happened. I want to somehow use this creatively. I feel like it was a sign to use it for some s.. more..Writing
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