There's no where to go?

I've given up

I've tried to be a good friend

I've tried to be me

But what happens when you don't like yourself?

 

I've hurt to many people

People say I'm someone else 

I don't know who's my friend or not

I've fallen off the wire

I've lost the path that was my life

 

I've hit rock bottom and there's no way to get up

I've lost the sense of who I am

I'm lost in the underland of stone

With the knowledge of only one thing

 

"When you've hit rock bottom, there's no where to go, BUT UP"

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Lamia]

that was very.....um....diffrent

[Bella-Marie]

Aw, this better not be true, and if it is, oh deeaar...
A smashing poem full of raw emotion, I liked the way lots of the sentences started with I've or I'm, it adds rhyme to your poem that is pretty much free-lance. The ending was great, and it gives a sliver of hope in the poem of dispair.