Freedom to Thee

Bella-Marie and I wrote this together. It may not rhyme very well but it's ot a great story line to me.XD

Eyes as gree as the sea in front of thee

Hair as dark as the bark of the tree

It lay on the wave of the rolling sea

Her blazing gaze thrust upon me

 

Her hair turned wild as it slid from it's knot

Her, taut, her eyes blazing hot,

She ran from the sea, like a lioness about to get shot,

She collapsed exhauster like her legs became arot.

 

Invisible to my eye, upon the winds in the grass she lye,

Strength returned, wings grew fast, she pulled her self up and got ready to fly

She ran up to me, eyes turned blue, lifting me up to see the world anew

 

The colours were fluro, the air was pure

To the mountains of colour, I could feel her lured

"The Mountains have dragons!" I cried "We must leave!"

Yet faster she flew, on the hunt for a feed

I had no other chocie, I began to plead

but still she flew on the path she lead

 

Exhausted from yelling, I dropped in her arms

And suddenly I was falling yet I stayed calm

I fell through the air and felt a tingle in my back

Wings now perched in a feathery packed

 

Down she dove, her wings she now lacked,

Fell into the sea with an almighty whack,

Still she lived and swam through the sea of facked,

Yet all I could do, was lay half dead on my back,

 

Out of the sea she dragged me

And up in the mountains she ran with me

 

The mountain air filled my lungs, and I screamed with relief

When then she beared her teeth

A creature attacked and her teeth sunk into it's thieving neck

 

Eyes dulled, fire spreading through them

Up into the sky she flew with, to the dragons den

 

On a pile of leaves she left me,

with nothing, but the final feeling of freedom inside of me.

 

Author's Note

My friend Bella-Marie and I wrote this, don't be to hard on us, and if there's any typos it's my fault.

Reviews

[Bella-Marie]

This poem... next time can we please to free-form??? It was fun top write though, enjoyed it immensely, and your tweaks have made it into a better poem if I say so myself. Haha. Liked the last line.