passing through

The sun sets high,

Slowing basking the world in shadows.

The lights flicker on,

And the world is bright again.

 

Like stars in the sky,

The lights of the city glow so bright

And as you pass through, the lights start to fade.

 

The long black city streets

Turn into narrow country roads.

The sidewalks full of passing people,

Turn into waving fields full of blooming flowers.

The sky, brightened by the city lights,

Turn to the blue moonlight.

The air loosens and the breeze flows.

 

And as you leave the city behind,

The tall buildings, stretching into the sky.

The sidewalks fill with people

And the honking horns of traffic.

You escape into the country side,

Full of trees stretching so high,

Hills as far as the eye can see.

And not until you see al around you,

Do you realize how beautiful the world really is

Reviews

[writer max ride]

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

[writer max ride]

Laura you're AWESOME so is fang

[writer max ride]

happy me!!!!!!

[writer max ride]

ducky.................................

[writer max ride]

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

[Writerdragonrider]

oh brother. I have a weird sister.

[writer max ride]

oh yeah you do and a pretty epic one too if I do say so myself. and I do! :>)

[Writerdragonrider]

lol you are a silly girl.

[writer max ride]

ikr? so are you!!! :>)

[writer max ride]

MEEPPPPP
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[Writerdragonrider]

nice! this is so beautiful!

[Matt "Mickey" Denney]

Awesome peom, Laura. Glad to know that I have a cousin that loves to write as much as I do or more. :)

[writer max ride]

COUSEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am friend's with laura!

[Laura Paxton]

yes, yes you.

[writer max ride]

kay, yay we're friends! I wrote poems... check em, out!!!