CAN I SKIP THIS PART?

MAD ANALYSIS

SO SPECIAL GENIUS

BREAKING ME APART AGAIN

MY THREATENED EXISTENCE

NO BUOYANT LIVING IN HERE

MISSING HUMANS

THE HEATED SECOND LAW

HAS WON; NO SOUL.

MAX MECHANICAL EFFICIENCY

RAISE YOUR GOD SO HIGH

UNJUST, YOU ARE SO NUMB

DEFECTED DESPAIR, CREATING ILLNESS;

HOLD ON TO THE DARK.

Reviews

[Missphit]

This is the first time I have come across a poem as unique as yours. You feel as though you are being told a secret, being given a warning that no one else is privy to. I enjoyed your work.
--Missphit

[Betty]

Wow, what a wonderful display of strong emotion. Great writing Irma.