Unfold the eyes

Unfold the eyes

A Poem by Mirna
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It's not hard to understand.

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Must the tree have legs

For it to stand?

Must the ocean have hands

For it to touch the sand?

Must the plant have a brain

For it to grow on land?

And must a creator be seen

For us to understand? 

© 2013 Mirna


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Bravo!

I loved the questions?

You made your readers contemplate which is so appreciative

wonderful job, this was enjoyable
Antonio :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mirna

11 Years Ago

thank you so much antonio :) hope you have a wonderful day xx
Antonio Valentino

11 Years Ago

I think your hoping made it be.. my day was wonderful thank you xx

:)
The last two lines are the one that really puts the drive into the poem.


Posted 11 Years Ago


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I truly review anything I read in my angle. the poem is about humans wanting to know the creater, and the creater of all the creations can easily be found, and seen, it only need to close your eyes and ask who created me? you are right you all need to see the creater, and for sure we will do, but till then we can see him through his creations. good work nad best luck

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mirna

11 Years Ago

yes that's correct, thank you for the lovely review xxx
Baban.A.A

11 Years Ago

most welcome....!
No only roots:)-Only if it wishes to touch:)-Only if it needs to think:)- Smiles :) never becacase he is seen in many forms of beauty:) Awesome write Sis:) bless be:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mirna

11 Years Ago

thank you so much :) xxx
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11 Years Ago

Smiles:) You are always welcome Sis:)

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Added on October 26, 2013
Last Updated on October 26, 2013
Tags: God, Nature, Ocean, Tree, Human, Poetry, Poem

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Mirna
Mirna

Abu Dhabi, Al Ain, United Arab Emirates



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I am a writer who is shy yet courageous, humble yet loud, wanting to break out of my shell and reach people and tell them we have the same problems, the same fears, the same hopes, and the same loves,.. more..

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